My college essay ( college essay help )

I saw a lake them too assalamualaikum to my awesome you viewers and hi how are you to you know my non-muslim viewers home this video i want to talk about college essays this is not one of those like you know i’m having like a whiteboard and this had no no it’s just you know some of you guys in high school some of you are juniors some of you might even be seniors this even can apply for sophomores and freshmen you know whatever my crowd is so when i was in high school I graduated in 2011 and my I got acceptance a lot of schools but I didn’t know what I want to be in life so I I dropped out of college I’m telling you kids right now do not jump over to college it’s a business take and I finally found out what I’m gonna do like 34 years later oh I want to be an English teacher but I’ll just go into a coma you know my high school stuff and um this is a something I believe that can help um especially for juniors and seniors so I’m close my windows pretty cold in here and um so college essays college essays when you apply for colleges nine times out of ten they’re gonna ask you for a college essay you will have like a list of the options or topics to talk about and then I must say at least ninety nine point nine percent of college is gonna have your own topic is gonna say you know your own topic so fortunately when I was in my English class and senior year we were asked to write a college essay so one thing my teacher said make it a story or you know right about that Sutton to happen in your life but don’t make it make it third person except for first person basically don’t say I don’t say me you know stuff like that so the kind of college essay I wrote is basically kind of my life story from the third person third third person view so I’m sure which you my college essay and tell you shouldn’t think of it and hopefully could give you an idea so when you apply to colleges it excuse me if I mess up both the gunshots and distasteful music couldn’t even hear myself cry because in the room next door and mother yelling because he walked out the room and he never came back he didn’t even look back to see he’s newborn child that’s what I know one of my peers is going to grow up either strong or a drug dealer well fortunately my father stayed living in a corner for the first five years of my life I’ve seen and heard things people don’t get to see in 10 years a corner that was a hot spot for gunshots and dealing all kinds of drugs fear me arguments about who’s going to pay the rent are we going to end up homeless but yet we still manage to love each other regardless of any situation and yet we stayed at the second floor apartment eventually the mother and father moved to the move to a place unknown for us a face where he can hear birds chirp lawnmowers and kids playing outside safety without being scared to be kids we lived there for a year until the father got into drugs mother separated us separated from him and moved back to the city that the child was born in but she said but she sent this child to a small state this child didn’t even know existed called Delaware because a family moved there to start a new life but the city was different it was a dirty place to live but there were no gunshots no drugs just people talking about somebody and fistfights every day they want to be gang members but get he avoided all of this after a year mother got the child back and was excited to see her we moved back to the city of work but we moved back to the city of birth but to the other side of the town which is quieter but gunshots were occasional but no drugs as I go as he got older I witness robberies at the kind of robberies with a gun I mean jump over the fence let me jump over the counter takes up snacks and run robberies but once the most but once a month they’re robbery with a gun and in the child said how do people have the heart for this how do people have the stomach to do this what goes on in your head why and yet he never did any of this go to a corner store buy a Snapple finish the bottle thrown at a car’s window and still the radio that barely worked take all the CDs even the game boy in the 9 year olds book bag in the backseat this kid soon to be teenagers this future man witness Allah give he eventually moved to Connecticut some of his way stood but to him but with him mama someone is wasted with him but his good behavior in the classroom and his grades defined him differently when he was out of the school this young man was a smart kid he witnessed things that couldn’t be stopped this kid went to jail and eventually changed his life dramatically this young man is loved by his friends loved ones family loved by teachers administrators but some of them knew his life story this young man overcame something not a lot of people can and he’s going to make his family proud by become the first person to get a master’s degrees and something his friends said something his friends who stood in the hood despises protected in his community community in the civilians of the country then when I wrote this on to become a cop that’s why that ending was there just uh basically saying you know the friends who stood in the hood despise and protected his families and civilians of this country basically saying a cop but obviously I changed my course of where I’m gonna go and yeah so I hope that helped you out again excuse me for any errors i made this was a rough draft i don’t i don’t have the final copy unfortunately so that’s why there were some eyes in it and i try to correct that as i was reading but hope this i hope this helped I really do have any questions please leave a comment like subscribe share you know especially for high school kids men and you know if you need help writing an essay or you need edit just let me know um tsuboi pyara ice on Lake them to my Muslim viewers and thank you for watching from a number some viewers have gone